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If I become a famous poet,

I won't be remembered.

[But you will be]
After all, a lot of my poems are about you.
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JuliusScipio Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Writer
*loves*

This is excellent. I love the little whisper at the end. It's a simple poem with a simple point- but it's a deep one. I like this. :)
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :heart:
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kandykitten1994 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
aiming at family and close friends??
Nice. Thats so sweet :D
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Writer
Yep!
Thank you! :heart:
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kandykitten1994 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
no problem
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SketchyRabbit Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
Aww, that's so sweet!
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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SketchyRabbit Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
:dance:
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Emma-Hyde Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Isn't it funny how we talk about famous poets and yet when it gets down to it, the poems get picked apart and the subject of them is debated for hours and hours. It's truly an irony that is.
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Writer
I know right? It's kind of annoying. They wrote it in poetry form for a reason.
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Emma-Hyde Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly. It's just so funny that its annoying.
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Doodelay Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Student Writer
this is why i've watched you.
You'll make to the front page one day with these little things lol
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Writer
Oh wow. Wow. Wow wow wow wow wow. That truly means a lot :)

And maybe.
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CharcoalRainbow Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Student Writer
oh yes.
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Student Writer
I know right?
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CharcoalRainbow Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Student Writer
haha. i just think that this is beautiful. i'd have something like that read at my wedding or funeral or an autobiography or something...



i don't know I:
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Writer
Oh, thank you!
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CharcoalRainbow Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Writer
it's very amazing. thankyou.
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