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I'm pretty, right?

…No?

Well, let me eat less
And tan more,
Burn my hair to make it straight
And spend all my money on clothes.

[Am I pretty now?]
Theme 57 of 100 Themes Challenge.

They ruin themselves in the process, but at least they look pretty.
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AmuPhiladelphia Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
smart :)
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xMuffinGurlx Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, so pretty... This is great
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Huuskosan666 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great one)=D
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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ThePoetstears Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
This is unfortunately true. Then bluntness in how you write this poem makes you think.
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Writer
Indeed.
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Tanglebreeze Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
I absolutely love this. So true and delightfully blunt. Keep up the great work!
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Irrelephantlovesyou Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you, Tangle! :D
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vickiangel Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
simple yet effective =)
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